Unit 6 Feedback
Hello Kaela,
Your website section is so cute I love the color scheme you ladies have going on! I think your introduction was great and I agree that we as a generation we were trying to stop with smart devices and yet here comes technology to take over and "improve" the way we learn. I think it would have been really interesting for you to put a little static of the technology use increase, in your age range, for schools. Just something that might stand out to parents that might be reading the site. I got a little lost when I was looking at your "E-Health Programs," I know there have been the bugs with people losing site information, but I think having a small few sentences to explain the purpose of that section would help the reader. I think the "Health Foods" video is great though but my favorite video was the animated one. I like how he says nothing and yet I find myself talking for him in my own head! So adorable and very relatable. Lastly, I think your advantages and disadvantages conductive to the age group that you are covering. It is so sad to know that technology was invited to make the world a easier place, and yet it can actually bring us more harm. Keep up the good work ladies only one more to go!
Cheers,
Brittany Fredrick
Your website section is so cute I love the color scheme you ladies have going on! I think your introduction was great and I agree that we as a generation we were trying to stop with smart devices and yet here comes technology to take over and "improve" the way we learn. I think it would have been really interesting for you to put a little static of the technology use increase, in your age range, for schools. Just something that might stand out to parents that might be reading the site. I got a little lost when I was looking at your "E-Health Programs," I know there have been the bugs with people losing site information, but I think having a small few sentences to explain the purpose of that section would help the reader. I think the "Health Foods" video is great though but my favorite video was the animated one. I like how he says nothing and yet I find myself talking for him in my own head! So adorable and very relatable. Lastly, I think your advantages and disadvantages conductive to the age group that you are covering. It is so sad to know that technology was invited to make the world a easier place, and yet it can actually bring us more harm. Keep up the good work ladies only one more to go!
Cheers,
Brittany Fredrick
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