Feedback Unit 3
Kaela and Heaven:
First off, you guys did a great job at covering all of the topics required this Unit. I especially enjoyed the videos you chose to go with your sections, I think they did a great job of driving the point home for each section they corresponded with. I think the Michelle Obama was especially infuriating! Money is the reason why adults have issues with healthier school lunches?! That makes me so sad because I think it is so important that children are exposed to healthy meal choices as early as possible to lay the foundation for healthy eating habits. We are so concerned about rising healthcare costs when there is so much we can do to prevent some of them, yet we don't! Very good thought provoking video.
I do think you could have expanded on a couple more of your sections and added some images to go with each! I think you only just scratched the surface on some, merely stating facts and percentages when you could have elaborated a little bit on them and maybe focused in a bit more on female differences in your information. Also, the layout on the top of the page was a little confusing because I had to keep scrolling up and down to read a new section and make sure I didn't miss anything, maybe make the spacing so we can just scroll down once? Other than that I think you guys did a really great job at covering all of the information while warning about the dangers of childhood obesity!
Hope Frisch, ATC
First off, you guys did a great job at covering all of the topics required this Unit. I especially enjoyed the videos you chose to go with your sections, I think they did a great job of driving the point home for each section they corresponded with. I think the Michelle Obama was especially infuriating! Money is the reason why adults have issues with healthier school lunches?! That makes me so sad because I think it is so important that children are exposed to healthy meal choices as early as possible to lay the foundation for healthy eating habits. We are so concerned about rising healthcare costs when there is so much we can do to prevent some of them, yet we don't! Very good thought provoking video.
I do think you could have expanded on a couple more of your sections and added some images to go with each! I think you only just scratched the surface on some, merely stating facts and percentages when you could have elaborated a little bit on them and maybe focused in a bit more on female differences in your information. Also, the layout on the top of the page was a little confusing because I had to keep scrolling up and down to read a new section and make sure I didn't miss anything, maybe make the spacing so we can just scroll down once? Other than that I think you guys did a really great job at covering all of the information while warning about the dangers of childhood obesity!
Hope Frisch, ATC
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